To what extent should the translation respect the grammar?

[Aga Tentakulus]

I don't assume two languages.
Rather, two characters.
Example in German.
"so nimm ..."
"ihr nehmt  ...."
"du nimmst  ...."
"ich nehme ....

engl.
The differences in language alone
"so nimm ..."
"you take ...."
"you take ...."
"i take ....
I think the differences are in how I write something.
"Du kannst das nehmen, oder, so nimm das."
You can take this, or, so take that.