12-11-2016, 12:20 AM
The third paragraph of You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login to view. is unusual in many ways. It's almost impossible to figure out the order in which the letters were added near the end where the gallows characters intrude into the space of the words above them.
It's almost as though word #8 (the P-gallows word) were written first and the others worked around it. Not saying this is what happened, but nothing about the line seems continuous or natural—it appears awkwardly constructed, like a patchwork.
It's almost as though word #8 (the P-gallows word) were written first and the others worked around it. Not saying this is what happened, but nothing about the line seems continuous or natural—it appears awkwardly constructed, like a patchwork.